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My Lady In White
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Song lyrics are a form of poetry, so here's one titled "My Lady In White", from my Zoo story-in-progress, "Sandey".




Presented in the story as being written by Bertram (Cap'n Bert) Atwater, it is a lament for his lost love. Because the character speaks in a maritime fashion and has a speech impediment, due to old wartime injuries, the off-spelling is deliberate, and reflects those factors.




This is the "long" version, where he is later singing it to himself, and the end is overheard, with a single-word penultimate line added. This fuller version is never heard or presented in its entirety, except here.




I have a melody for it also, but I cannot write music. However, if you have ever heard the song "Maiden Wine" from the Star Trek episode "Plato's Stepchildren", written by Leonard Nimoy, and performed by him as his character Mr. Spock under telekinetic force by "The Platonians", the melody, though different, has a similar "flavor" and conveys a similar, though greater sense of melancholy.




And who is this "lady In White"? You'll just have to wait for chapter 5.




So here is the song. Or lyrics, or poem, or whatever it is.

 




And it is dedicated to all that have ever had a special "Lady" (or Gent), and lost them.

 




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My Lady In White

(A song of lament by Cap'n Bert)

 




My Lady in white

As fair as can be

You are my life

come back to me.




O' Lady in white

With accents in black

Such beauty You hold

Such grace that I lack.




As white as a Dove

Her spirit so free

How could She love

Somebody like me?




As ugly I am

She gave not a damn

What did She see

That drew Her to me?




This Lady in white

She lit up my life

If only I could have

Made Her my wife.




Dear Lady in white

I beg You to stay!

But She took to flight

An' then sailed away.




You came in th' spring

My heart moved to sing

You left in th' fall

My heart in a pall.




Life was so grand

Bright an' with cheer

Now it is bland

Hoary an' drear.




Come back my dear Lady

Don't stay away

Please don't say "maybe"

We CAN find a way!




My Lady in white

As fair as can be

You are my life

Come back to me.




I love You, dear Lady...




PLEASE




Come back to me!

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Resident Hyaena ^..^




 


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